The geisha strummed the three strings of her shamisen for
her Samurai master. The instrument's body encased in catskin that held the sweet
vibrations like a purr. Its silk strings fashioned of the same material as the
kimono in which she was draped. Three ivory pegs chorusing the hairpins shaping
her high chignon hair. The three strings rubbed against one another to conjure
up the sound of a whole hive of bees. The plectrum caressing against the body
to conjure the rhythms of the hooves of her master's horse. Her fingers
palpating the frets to make the instrument sound like sweetly dripping honey.
She was his flower in the pleasure quarters and his willow
throughout the rest of the house, as she fed his soul with poetry, dance,
calligraphy and grace. At night, to preserve her elaborate hair pinned with
turtleshell, she slept with her head on a block and a bed of rice around its
base to alert her, were her crown to roll off the wood.
Then came the American bomb clouds that momentarily blotted out the
sun and stripped all the leaves from the trees. Those birds not in its vicinity,
till crashed in their flying, as they conceived night had descended. The bees
disappeared. Turtles retreated inside their shells never to resurface from
their hibernation.
Now her silk kimono sat uncomfortably. She could feel the
silk writhing over her body, as if the worms sought to reclaim their cocoons
for their unborn broods. The shimasen's silk strings came away from the catskin
body, as they too protested their indenture. Her master took his pitiless steel
and rendered Seppuku. His insides unravelling like the insurgent strings on her
shamisen. Her tresses escaped their turtleshell grips. No more of flowers and
willows. A perpetual winter had eclipsed Japan's ever rising sun.
The silhouette of an American GI stood behind her shoji. He
slid the screen door back, his bulk dimming the whole room. Save for the corona
of light from the burning tip of his cigarette waxing and waning as he breathed
heavily. Try as she might, she couldn't convince herself that it was a firefly
in the night attracted by the scent of her hair's pomade.
Taken from the Flash Fiction collection "Long Stories Short" available on Amazon Kindle
Taken from the Flash Fiction collection "Long Stories Short" available on Amazon Kindle
13 comments:
Neat twist on the idea of an eclipse, and this was such a sad tale of an unravelling world. I guess we sometimes forget the human impact of our actions.
love the echoing threes - like the san san kudo sake - three sips from three glasses, both bitter and sweet
As always Marc you paint a supreme picture! I could feel the relaxing grace of her position and then the melting of that grace. Excellent!
Beautifully written Marc. The details are haunting. I liked the image of the GI's cigarette and her wish that it was a firefly. Poetic and devestating at the same time.
Lovely descriptions, even though many of the words in the first paragraph meant nothing to me as I havnt encountered them before lol.
Lovely ending aswell, I like the cigarette waxing and waning as the GI breathed, incredibly effective.
Beautiful scene-painting.
Absolutely beautiful imagery Marc.
Loved the calmness of the geisha and master's world, so sad the devastation brought by the bomb.
Powerful stuff - a glimpse into a different world - great writing
Amazing details! This is so vivid in colour and scent it's just a pleasure to read over and over again and follow every trail the creatures take in their desperate attempt to escape; though it delivers sadness and harsh truth, it still is a beautiful piece Marc!
Gorgeous imagery!
Unexpectedly linear, Marc, and fraught with personal details. Dug reading this before bed tonight. Thanks for sharing!
Very well written and powerful story, evocative and layered with detail and emotion. A great achievement, very much enjoyed this.
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