Heaven had become a hive of hellish hother and pother.
Everywhere the eye could range, angels with gossamer wings were scurrying
hither and thither, humping armfuls of plaster of paris. Save for those angels
who had toppled over and lay prostrate, unable to right themselves. The
increasingly feeble splay of their wings heralding the slow extinguishing of
their light, like the dying embers of a fire. These angels had revoked their
immortality.
Some had curled their wings around in front of them to form
a scoop with which to carry a greater volume of the plaster. If they failed to
reach their destination before the gypsum hardened, the seraphim were cast
solid and pitched headlong to the ground. Yet in fact any contact with the
terrestrial substance unwittingly formed a granular seal on their own death warrant.
Any besmirching of their diaphanous plumes with the duller clots of the plaster,
would eventually set hard, thereby plucking their wings of flight and exposing
them to the afflictions of gravity.
Yet still they persisted in their lethal toil. Some celestials
simply poured the plaster over themselves and transformed instantly into
statues. In suicide thus they became the objects of their collective endeavour.
Since the angels were striving to build a terracotta army in their own
likeness. Stretching back as far as the horizon and beyond. The host were
trying to suggest a swelling of their own ranks to the near infinite. To
confront another, oncoming swarm. Finite, but pullulatingly deadly. For mankind
was on the move and seeking new pastures. After eviscerating their own terrestrial
realm.
Puttos were exhorting their aerial elders to evermore effort.
Tooting their long-stemmed trumpets. The very same notes that used to usher in sweet
harmonies, now resounded as with the blare of a cataclysmic tocsin. Nude Cupids
were firing their forlorn love arrows over the heads of their venerable peers
to spur them on yonder. Yet the further down the plaster parade, the more
ragged and less-angel like the sculptures appeared. In fact they looked nothing
remotely more than a pillar or a termite mound. The remaining angels still
feverishly trying to erect statues at this point, complained to their goading
juveniles that their delicate hands were only meant for strumming harp strings.
Not shaping lime that burned their skin.
Just as the Cherubs were about to remonstrate further with
their patriarchs, the latter interposed by what means the humans had finally
managed to locate their own ethereal plane. That sublimity which had previously
provided them with their inviolability from the grossly material. How man had returned
to consider their own ancient maps of earth. Festooned with Cherubs blowing trumpets
propelling propitious marine winds and Puttos unfurling scrolled cartographies.
Man simply gazed up from the terrestrial landmasses following the orientation of
the cherubs and hence were now massed outside the empyreal gates. The Puttos
and Cherubs protested that such maps also bore fearsome dragons and Gogs and
Magogs. They inquired of their wise ones why the humans had not followed their abyssal
trails, why they had only alighted on the celestial? The angels explained that
when the humans looked at such monsters, they only saw reflections of themselves.
Irresistibly, mankind's first port of call had been Hell. It
being of a more natural fit temperamentally. Imagine their self-righteous shock
at being informed by Lucifer that Hell had been the original version of their
own earth. Its current searing temperatures and icy inertia were what their
earlier incarnations had reduced the planet to. Lucifer and his skeletal crew had
been charged with maintaining the fissile core and preventing it from mimicking
a supernova. Those scientists who happened to be in the van of the human hordes
had been disbelieving, declaiming that no race could ever have the capacities
for survival within the fearsome temperatures of a star. Mammon retorted that prototype
earth was ever a planet and not a star, only how in their forebears ravenous
surge, its magma had been fired up and the molten core irradiated through
mankind's meddling and destabilising of the whole fabric. There had flashed the most fleeting flicker of recognition
in the faces of the scientists, for after all, similar processes had overtaken
their own earth and compelled their verdict of a species-wide emigration. Their
smugness swiftly wiped from their countenances, as the press of the multitude
from behind impelled them into fiery pits and the abyssal chasm itself. Mankind
had delivered its verdict with a casual shrug of barging shoulders and seethed
onwards. They were after a superior berth than this home once spurned already.
Lucifer had signalled ahead to his angelic brethren.
The Cherubs and Puttos were distraught that their own joyous
annunciation and blazoning of human progress had betrayed their own kindred.
And yet the humans couldn't have been as terrible as their elders lead them to
believe could they? After all, consider the grotesque impressions of their own
form rendered here by the angels and compare that with the bewitching
pulchritude of the human depictions. No, with such art in their souls, the
humans simply wouldn't pull their wings off them as they might do to lowly flies.
If anyone was presenting a certain ugliness of the poetic soul, it was the
angels themselves with these abominable likenesses. The callow angels turned to
welcome their spiritual masters who had proven they could work miracles with base matter...
Taken from my third flash fiction collection:
Available from Amazon Kindle Store free to download 3rd-7th June 2016
15 comments:
Oh I do love the way you subvert the universe...Those poor cherubs don't know what's coming
Indeed I love the picture you have created here, unsettle the world as we know it eh. Loved this line:
"The angels explained that when the humans looked at such monsters, they only saw reflections of themselves."
Absolutely beautiful. Exquisite ending.
I love your explanation of Hell - it makes Lucifer look less like a demon and more like someone just trying to do a job.
Bravo!
I love how you take the ephemera of the past (maps) and use it as a fantastical means of passage etherwhere - a new manifest destiny with as much likelihood of success. Is there anything humans won't try to conquer? I love the anxious dread of these poor creatures.
Funny enough, I got a visual from the film version of What Dreams May Come - linked back to the Seventh Seal (both with sardonic image of Max Von Sydow) and now to this. Illumination on the edge of ruin. It's rich, fantastical - would be something to see, represented in a graphic novel.
Brilliant collision of ideas - angels aspiring to terracotta warriors and working like ants. Loved this.
Thanks chaps and chapesses. I reread this and gained new connections within it myself!
marc
What a cracking first line! Not that it stands alone, of course.
Loving the imagery of the angels turning into statues
And what a genius way of locating Heaven!
Oh, those poor angels! But I couldn't help but laugh at the image of them pouring the plaster of paris over themselves - hilarious.
This might be your most original yet Marc. Love it!
Some great lines in here, Marc, and I like how you mesh a traditional religious worldview with a modern scientific one without any real incongruity. I'm left pondering, though, where is God in all of this? Don't know if that was your intent or not, but this brief tale could spark some seriously intense theological discussion.
The sentence structure struck me as fragmentary, which was a bit jarring at first but gave it a distinct rhythmic style once I got into it. I really enjoyed it, and if you ever put together another #FF collection, this one should definitely be in it.
funny you should mention God Travis, he was in the draft idea version, but got guillotined by the word limit. I did have him as an absentee landlord, scouting out the next celestial paradise, but in the end he remained on the cutting room floor and I saved on his appearance money :-)
Love the description of Hell as some place the humans already effed over. Reminds me of the bumper sticker, "Earth First, we'll screw up the other planets later."
I'm with tokidokizenzen on the fragmentary sentences. It did well illustrate the mood of the angels as they built their defenses though!
Superb throughout.. and a great opening line. which sets the scene for a fabulous metaphysical farce. One of your best!!
A brilliant piece of writing Marc, I do feel rather sorry for those heavenly creatures knowing that us lot are on our way to ruin their bit of real estate.
Excellent writing Marc.
I liked the pace of the story. It gave me time to adjust to the visions you beautifuly deliver and the actions of the angels. I also enjoyed this idea of Hell.
Superb work indeed.
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