tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post5716354623331156787..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: Bad Apple - Friday FlashSulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger26125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-68494171829430645262010-09-10T20:32:27.317+01:002010-09-10T20:32:27.317+01:00What a romp!
After all that I'm too intimidat...What a romp!<br /><br />After all that I'm too intimidated to proffer a pun.<br /><br />Excellently done.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-40614053949890363912010-09-08T19:22:03.407+01:002010-09-08T19:22:03.407+01:00Amazing writing here. Astonishing effort and bravu...Amazing writing here. Astonishing effort and bravura wordplay throughout.Rachel Blackbirdsonghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02246966713076881105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-26601287345827610902010-09-06T22:43:55.425+01:002010-09-06T22:43:55.425+01:00Poor Adam! This was hysterical, and your puns ver...Poor Adam! This was hysterical, and your puns very clever. The following made me LOL:<br /><br />"But yore is less when progress comes a coldcalling..."<br /><br />Great job!<br /><br />CeciliaCecilia Dominichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12799727636246434837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-84748300045239227962010-09-05T05:58:29.023+01:002010-09-05T05:58:29.023+01:00I'll second everyone else praise on this and a...I'll second everyone else praise on this and avoid any further puns. Mostly because now I'm hungry ;)<br /><br />Great job!Anthonyhttp://www.bishopneo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-44530387550328583832010-09-05T05:00:23.425+01:002010-09-05T05:00:23.425+01:00I want to hear you read this one out loud - the wo...I want to hear you read this one out loud - the word play is applephenomenal and will be all the more delectable when heard rather than read. Every sentence is a treat for the senses - you are the king :-)PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07521953491880916840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-3343642319613455962010-09-04T06:31:47.598+01:002010-09-04T06:31:47.598+01:00Ridiculously inventive... I'm really envious o...Ridiculously inventive... I'm really envious of how clever this was.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-32382361661612401822010-09-04T00:08:23.439+01:002010-09-04T00:08:23.439+01:00Loved how you played with both the language and th...Loved how you played with both the language and the Adam and Eve story in this one. This was an excellent story!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-78542672260220045892010-09-03T23:26:38.175+01:002010-09-03T23:26:38.175+01:00Great use of language, descriptions here. Nicely d...Great use of language, descriptions here. Nicely done, Marc!Joz Varlohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12750541029227514781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-68531246784896993072010-09-03T21:50:07.430+01:002010-09-03T21:50:07.430+01:00I'm surprised Johnny Appleseed didn't have...I'm surprised Johnny Appleseed didn't have an issue with Adam over this. :)<br /><br />I wish I had a third of your vocabulary and wordplay skills. Deft and funny. And simply amazing writing.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04548995059233308982noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-17973761712975004992010-09-03T19:13:17.702+01:002010-09-03T19:13:17.702+01:00That's seriously impressive and very clever. L...That's seriously impressive and very clever. Love it.Leah Petersenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17668989627100455974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-91180536766901174952010-09-03T18:28:17.717+01:002010-09-03T18:28:17.717+01:00I sense a theme here... a very appletizing morsel ...I sense a theme here... a very appletizing morsel of your writing. You had lots of fun writing this. Amazing wordplay. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-22118724033992572010-09-03T15:54:55.789+01:002010-09-03T15:54:55.789+01:00"applelickability" - LOVE that word Marc..."applelickability" - LOVE that word Marc. Although a bit difficult to read, what with all the tongue-twisters, this was much fun. Your use of language is astounding.Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-62913288198714527972010-09-03T14:09:38.900+01:002010-09-03T14:09:38.900+01:00This is going to take some digesting. Will be bac...This is going to take some digesting. Will be back for second and third helpings.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAdam Byatthttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-22279938365733756262010-09-03T13:49:53.113+01:002010-09-03T13:49:53.113+01:00Grand appleause for this one. Your use of language...Grand appleause for this one. Your use of language is dazzling.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-51065377433674699632010-09-03T11:42:45.020+01:002010-09-03T11:42:45.020+01:00I had to laugh at the name of your town, "Met...I had to laugh at the name of your town, "Metroland," because that's the name of the company I work for. And then I laughed again as the apple puns built and built and built. My god, man - amazing!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-83882326011619580882010-09-03T10:58:15.024+01:002010-09-03T10:58:15.024+01:00apple saucy turnover x
Penapple saucy turnover x<br />PenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-27743507688709111822010-09-03T10:13:31.875+01:002010-09-03T10:13:31.875+01:00Wonderful wordspinning but particularly densely wr...Wonderful wordspinning but particularly densely wrought this week, so need to let it ferment. Your language ignites the senses.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-10753036118038083272010-09-03T08:53:00.789+01:002010-09-03T08:53:00.789+01:00in th emain first time, but not exclusively. There...in th emain first time, but not exclusively. There is some editing, mainly to ensure no repetitions.Sulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-42215567378536682402010-09-03T08:45:06.775+01:002010-09-03T08:45:06.775+01:00I'm beyond apple puns to reply to this. It'...I'm beyond apple puns to reply to this. It's amazing. I love this: "the blackened smut trail of an insect's fly-through take-out."<br /><br />How much do you edit, or do these fabulous words just appear the first time through?Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-57232214889681958402010-09-03T00:44:24.832+01:002010-09-03T00:44:24.832+01:00Applicious. I might need to read it again to catc...Applicious. I might need to read it again to catch all of the layers of language and metaphor you have going here. My favorite - Adam & Eve's prototypical trust issues (the whole paragraph). Brilliant stuff and funny. Plus, since I live in suburbia - covenances and all -I gave an extra chuckle.Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-9305202607003320012010-09-03T00:40:25.612+01:002010-09-03T00:40:25.612+01:00The wordplay here is breathtaking.The wordplay here is breathtaking.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-60144810405446045752010-09-02T23:45:17.605+01:002010-09-02T23:45:17.605+01:00Such a feast of language! This piece must surely b...Such a feast of language! This piece must surely be the apple of your eye...Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-78718052408211106502010-09-02T22:42:51.478+01:002010-09-02T22:42:51.478+01:00Just until the fruit ripens in my head...Just until the fruit ripens in my head...Sulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-73304895711431755532010-09-02T22:33:22.839+01:002010-09-02T22:33:22.839+01:00Punappleicious! I can't imagine how long it ta...Punappleicious! I can't imagine how long it takes you to write these...Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-378338980844395142010-09-02T22:30:10.096+01:002010-09-02T22:30:10.096+01:00Damn, I wanted to work appleplause in but the stor...Damn, I wanted to work appleplause in but the story was too much on a down curve to use it!Sulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.com