tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post2572545760608015199..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: Cinderella's Crystal Tips - Friday FlashSulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger37125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-31091670836071661482010-04-26T18:00:21.431+01:002010-04-26T18:00:21.431+01:00Another sensuous story from you Marc. Love your pr...Another sensuous story from you Marc. Love your prose, swirling and velvet. Fantastic feast for the eyes and mind.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-731497135440659762010-04-26T05:38:01.142+01:002010-04-26T05:38:01.142+01:00Your close attention to hands is inspiring. I enjo...Your close attention to hands is inspiring. I enjoyed the poetry of each paragraph. In our lifetime we all absorb the touch of other people's hands upon us and each touch is unique. I've never analyzed it quite like this, but it is very intriguing...what fingers tell us...this sense we often take for granted (feeling). The fact you name the ex: Cindy is good..it ties into your title well and the touch of a hand...the perfect fit. It could be the perfect fit about his neck like a noose as well. I think that darkness is probably what appeals the most...it isn't obvious...it slinks in like a feline predator.Paula Rayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03315919140323364702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-23454560467736225752010-04-25T04:50:22.307+01:002010-04-25T04:50:22.307+01:00I was confused about what happened but enjoyed yo...I was confused about what happened but enjoyed your style and the vivid description. nice.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-16610305039311066492010-04-25T04:32:48.342+01:002010-04-25T04:32:48.342+01:00This one dances the line between creepy and romant...This one dances the line between creepy and romantic. Found myself wondering what, exactly, he's having these women caress.<br /><br />CDCecilia Dominichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12799727636246434837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-7120089198093147652010-04-24T15:35:02.579+01:002010-04-24T15:35:02.579+01:00Talk about fetishistic devotion! This was a loving...Talk about fetishistic devotion! This was a loving indulgence in obsession - gripping!Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-85789479615656759782010-04-24T15:03:35.236+01:002010-04-24T15:03:35.236+01:00*looking at my own hands and seeing where they fit...*looking at my own hands and seeing where they fit*<br />Coolio story, Marc!Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-5449983245121135472010-04-24T14:56:49.156+01:002010-04-24T14:56:49.156+01:00Poetically creepy and creepily poetic. "Livid...Poetically creepy and creepily poetic. "Livid throttle" - nice.<br /><br />I won't bite my nails for the next ten minutes (no small feat for me), just for youmazzz in Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-16946693535042985852010-04-24T13:44:07.889+01:002010-04-24T13:44:07.889+01:00There is a lot of poetry in these prose. Nicely do...There is a lot of poetry in these prose. Nicely done.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://www.jmstrother.com/MadUtopia/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-79198581054740910202010-04-24T13:34:56.024+01:002010-04-24T13:34:56.024+01:00The description in this is fantastic - and the ide...The description in this is fantastic - and the idea fresh. You've done a great job getting the reader from A to B.Thom Gabrukiewiczhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13286670695334830471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-38139917275984468802010-04-24T12:45:58.332+01:002010-04-24T12:45:58.332+01:00Sensual and elegant, Marc. And there's a lot o...Sensual and elegant, Marc. And there's a lot of truth here, about things you can tell about a person from their fingers. What is present, what is not. Well done, as always.Lou Freshwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08849342766852653969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-37000661058567772332010-04-24T12:24:39.027+01:002010-04-24T12:24:39.027+01:00Limned!
Cool meditation of sorts on the fingerti...Limned! <br /><br />Cool meditation of sorts on the fingertips. Cool take on this myth. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-74009212172302968032010-04-24T11:27:20.230+01:002010-04-24T11:27:20.230+01:00Ooh, I liked that. the minute Cindy was exposed as...Ooh, I liked that. the minute Cindy was exposed as an Imelda Marcos imitator, I knew she was trouble. Really lovely way to express a failed and poisonous relationship. Also liked analogue of digits/digital analogue...Virginia Moffatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12071059148315715405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-32952592551960092732010-04-24T11:19:58.269+01:002010-04-24T11:19:58.269+01:00Am finding your protag this week not a little cree...Am finding your protag this week not a little creepy. And eurgh to that knuckle-busting ring that was the start point. Loved 'whorls' and 'colophon' in particular this week.<br /><br />And thanks also for the extra paragraphing :)Lily Mulhollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09804113718224654006noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-49341681672856353692010-04-24T10:44:10.141+01:002010-04-24T10:44:10.141+01:00I like a man who's good with his hands.I like a man who's good with his hands.Karen from Mentorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03685540761526680384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-24391614017496891402010-04-24T09:49:42.925+01:002010-04-24T09:49:42.925+01:00A remarkably intimate look at this world. Sensual ...A remarkably intimate look at this world. Sensual even in describing what repels, it led this reader to a soft smile of conclusion. "... stop up his breath ..." Beautiful use of language. Thank you.<br /><br />Take care,<br />JessAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-80155941931245147112010-04-24T05:25:58.398+01:002010-04-24T05:25:58.398+01:00What is it about hands?
We can make a fetish of ...What is it about hands? <br /><br />We can make a fetish of almost anything - but this one reaches quite literally into another realm. <br /><br />Sensual, fun - an insight into one man's idea of a perfect moment. <br /><br />Well done.<br />DJAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-77301256802757423272010-04-24T02:23:44.894+01:002010-04-24T02:23:44.894+01:00So, the Prince isn't quite as charming as they...So, the Prince isn't quite as charming as they would have us believe. :)<br /><br />Wonderfully observed and descriptive language in this. Tactile. I like it.KjMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17691028465137798738noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-39311645743993942772010-04-24T01:58:06.081+01:002010-04-24T01:58:06.081+01:00The hands have always been the first thing I notic...The hands have always been the first thing I notice about a man, so this really resonates Marc. <br /><br />Brilliant construction as always.Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-60936012871970729962010-04-24T00:11:56.410+01:002010-04-24T00:11:56.410+01:00This is magnificent.
You really can tell so much ...This is magnificent.<br /><br />You really can tell so much about people from their hands and fingers. And the writing here is just so lush and... perfect.<br /><br />This one got me. Bravo.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-58857114636709125392010-04-24T00:05:17.422+01:002010-04-24T00:05:17.422+01:00It's funny you mention that. Most of my work a...It's funny you mention that. Most of my work always starts from the human body, or some part of it at least. Thanks for your comment.Sulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-89611243707205704252010-04-24T00:01:17.744+01:002010-04-24T00:01:17.744+01:00I found this beautiful, achingly so, in its desire...I found this beautiful, achingly so, in its desire--its sheer fleshiness. I think is one of my favorites from you.Melissahttp://windspiritgirl.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-37734070008815665462010-04-23T22:33:37.017+01:002010-04-23T22:33:37.017+01:00Foot fetish meets hand fetish. They were so perf...Foot fetish meets hand fetish. They were so perfect for each other! I agree with Heather-dark, sexy, and twisted. And also well written. Nice job.Genevieve Jackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16178276724159826428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-58019584965594973452010-04-23T21:53:38.580+01:002010-04-23T21:53:38.580+01:00Amazing use of words - I especially love "dia...Amazing use of words - I especially love "diamond-like grip"! Excellent. :-)Aislinn O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10016307238982902244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-6845902357432178882010-04-23T21:18:06.985+01:002010-04-23T21:18:06.985+01:00I loved this - dark, sexy and twisted. You have a ...I loved this - dark, sexy and twisted. You have a great turn of phrase as ever and I enjoyed the reference to Cindy's Imelda Marcos tendencies - something I can definitely relate to!Heather Woodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07286242856875771933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-36458030987945851172010-04-23T20:05:45.732+01:002010-04-23T20:05:45.732+01:00I'm awestruck, Marc. This is gorgeous!
The fi...I'm awestruck, Marc. This is gorgeous!<br /><br />The first two lines made me laugh. Then you took me on an odyssey through a subject I've never given any thought to - and it was a glass slipper story of dark dimensions.<br /><br />Bravo!Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.com