tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post116172969306328230..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: Echoes - Friday FlashSulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-27101294465925484822014-08-10T23:40:33.600+01:002014-08-10T23:40:33.600+01:00I found myself laughing at: "But her reproduc...I found myself laughing at: "But her reproduction up there on screen suggests you got your timing wrong." But then my heart sank. What an incredible roller coaster ride.<br /><br />By the way, I am now reading Under The Skin based upon your recommendation. It is truly an excellent read thus far.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-74451960477855706322014-08-10T19:04:00.789+01:002014-08-10T19:04:00.789+01:00The use of naval warfare terms gives this an odd d...The use of naval warfare terms gives this an odd dimension, torpedoed, depth-charged. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13096021087395266714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-2811097256131051492014-08-10T02:59:06.909+01:002014-08-10T02:59:06.909+01:00The mindfulness of the narrator really gives this ...The mindfulness of the narrator really gives this a punch. Beautiful stuff.Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-47141609770131029312014-08-08T23:20:45.491+01:002014-08-08T23:20:45.491+01:00I too echo Icy's comment.
Beautifully written...I too echo Icy's comment.<br /><br />Beautifully written marc.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-54296593011559115492014-08-08T18:39:52.668+01:002014-08-08T18:39:52.668+01:00Beautifully written. But the sad ending was so, we...Beautifully written. But the sad ending was so, well, sad. Sucks for her.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-88215487333165431172014-08-08T16:46:08.195+01:002014-08-08T16:46:08.195+01:00I really liked the idea of sketching the child wit...I really liked the idea of sketching the child with the ultrasound. Beautifully told but so sad.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-63658935283942027612014-08-08T14:30:42.594+01:002014-08-08T14:30:42.594+01:00I was thinking just what Icy said, it's so sad...I was thinking just what Icy said, it's so sad. There's a lyricism to it that, in a way, sort of cradles the poignancy. Beautifully written Marc.Roslyn Fainhttp://roslynfain.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-46042954998049453062014-08-08T10:26:52.881+01:002014-08-08T10:26:52.881+01:00This started off with a sense of positivity but th...This started off with a sense of positivity but then became one of the saddest stories I think I've read.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-51798075551211792312014-08-08T00:34:39.384+01:002014-08-08T00:34:39.384+01:00Aw sad - I loved the descriptiveness of the ultra...Aw sad - I loved the descriptiveness of the ultra sound - " Even her fingers floating like sargassum in the void are charted through the sink and swim of the sonic undulations."Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.com