tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post9180036554984989242..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: The Disenchanted Forest - Friday FlashSulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-15247314448643452712014-07-22T00:25:42.514+01:002014-07-22T00:25:42.514+01:00I can think of two physical spaces that would answ...I can think of two physical spaces that would answer this description very well. Funny, they both border areas known as "nice" suburbs. So long as the tall grass obscures the evidence and doesn't let it lower property values, no-one seems to care.<br /><br />Nicely done.Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-83112358284242858122014-07-21T04:52:18.549+01:002014-07-21T04:52:18.549+01:00this reminds me of my brain after a long night at ...this reminds me of my brain after a long night at the bar, all just a little messed up and abused. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13096021087395266714noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-90132775698576156722014-07-20T22:49:48.360+01:002014-07-20T22:49:48.360+01:00Ooh, nice, Marc. Dystopian mythopoetry subverting ...Ooh, <i>nice</i>, Marc. Dystopian mythopoetry subverting the old ideologies. Delish : )Miss Alisterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16657740513820420488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-10931274209369188022014-07-20T16:54:37.563+01:002014-07-20T16:54:37.563+01:00This is very urban, simultaneously poetically magi...This is very urban, simultaneously poetically magical and grotesque. It's a collection of rawness, collision between nature and humanity's gifts in a way of accessorizing it brutally, breaching something. And then the killer last line, attributing to the stillness. Beautiful. Cindy Vaskovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747628778627025130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-21168131687368625452014-07-20T16:46:19.030+01:002014-07-20T16:46:19.030+01:00Well done -- I agree with Natalie, it's a powe...Well done -- I agree with Natalie, it's a powerful image that will linger.Cathryn Granthttp://cathryngrant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-42050822007526387862014-07-20T13:26:05.052+01:002014-07-20T13:26:05.052+01:00You paint a powerfully sad picture with this story...You paint a powerfully sad picture with this story. It'll linger ...Natalie Bowershttp://www.nataliebowers.org/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-47000807955406800812014-07-20T02:14:12.718+01:002014-07-20T02:14:12.718+01:00Like Helen, I too enjoyed the last line. It was so...Like Helen, I too enjoyed the last line. It was some wicked party, that's for certain. It's interesting how they made do with what they had.Stephenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04753736809917062955noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-44123899988485101242014-07-19T18:13:11.471+01:002014-07-19T18:13:11.471+01:00Quite the vivid imagery! Quite the vivid imagery! Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-18307057396746996522014-07-19T09:12:44.303+01:002014-07-19T09:12:44.303+01:00The whole story is sad, more than sad, but that la...The whole story is sad, more than sad, but that last line makes it absolutely chilling. Terrific work, as always, Marc!Roslyn Fainhttp://roslynfain.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-86537230660075266542014-07-19T03:54:55.715+01:002014-07-19T03:54:55.715+01:00I liked the way you used all of the different type...I liked the way you used all of the different types of trash.liminalfictionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08762010680878316253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-40269314812658557632014-07-18T23:01:03.261+01:002014-07-18T23:01:03.261+01:00hey that's either my neighbourhood or the insi...hey that's either my neighbourhood or the inside of my mind you're talking about there Steve :-)Sulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-13776606510685864772014-07-18T22:38:44.562+01:002014-07-18T22:38:44.562+01:00Jeez, what a horrible place. Jeez, what a horrible place. Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-63028378454362864982014-07-18T13:35:26.148+01:002014-07-18T13:35:26.148+01:00I see a modern-day Odin hanging from the world ash...I see a modern-day Odin hanging from the world ash, and instead of an eye sacrificed for knowledge, he wears Google Glass. Simon K.http://www.simonkearns.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-40541676126652730082014-07-18T11:52:34.877+01:002014-07-18T11:52:34.877+01:00eerily apocalyptic, marc! the accumulation is well...eerily apocalyptic, marc! the accumulation is well meted out, builds nicely to the great last line.kymmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18277722091216771412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-32196929968160185832014-07-18T10:24:27.423+01:002014-07-18T10:24:27.423+01:00Both a sad indictment of our times and a warning f...Both a sad indictment of our times and a warning for the future too.Linda Parkinson-Hardmanhttp://womanontheedgeofreality.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-86287810365350982922014-07-18T09:28:00.862+01:002014-07-18T09:28:00.862+01:00Hmm... Good one. Gripping within its few lines mak...Hmm... Good one. Gripping within its few lines making me want to know 'where will it end up?' So - which lowliest man: how many eyes, how many wounds? AB Singerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05081664992357181626noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-50340678550172868772014-07-18T07:22:27.080+01:002014-07-18T07:22:27.080+01:00Loved the last line!Loved the last line!Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.com