tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post6708170931643881332..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: Written on The Skin - friday FlashSulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-59160975495783772082011-10-07T13:53:53.964+01:002011-10-07T13:53:53.964+01:00Poor, poor Daphne! I can certainly feel for her as...Poor, poor Daphne! I can certainly feel for her as I've had skin issues since being diagnosed with fibromyalgia, (which causes all sorts of issues), for years. But bless her heart, at least she felt love along the way. <br /><br />Fantastic language, as always Marc!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-42873919317131602011-10-03T11:52:56.758+01:002011-10-03T11:52:56.758+01:00Wow great piece - poor girl. Love the description...Wow great piece - poor girl. Love the descriptions and the way each stage of her life gave her new skins issues. ExcellentAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-91999651696924666482011-10-03T03:40:33.194+01:002011-10-03T03:40:33.194+01:00What a whopper of a story in such a short space, M...What a whopper of a story in such a short space, Marc. I feel for the girl. Wonderful descriptions.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-41546101726555524692011-10-03T03:36:42.952+01:002011-10-03T03:36:42.952+01:00How sad. And it made my skin crawl.How sad. And it made my skin crawl.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-10570347658647740752011-10-02T14:09:21.300+01:002011-10-02T14:09:21.300+01:00It's great to see you back at the flash fictio...It's great to see you back at the flash fiction game, Marc. Great work with this one, touching and sad.Chuck Allenhttp://www.chuckallen.usnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-73279925908196687352011-10-02T09:30:28.870+01:002011-10-02T09:30:28.870+01:00I really felt for this girl and how we as a race t...I really felt for this girl and how we as a race tend to judge a book by its cover. Very clever and descriptive piece.Helenhttp://helen-scribbles.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-71016478505893432222011-10-01T18:23:17.033+01:002011-10-01T18:23:17.033+01:00How very sad. This highlights how much we judge pe...How very sad. This highlights how much we judge people by their external appearances. She was human on the inside, no matter what she looked like.Angela Perryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15598455060979053040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-17984165499347153162011-09-30T22:41:45.844+01:002011-09-30T22:41:45.844+01:00I've nursed all manner of skin conditions from...I've nursed all manner of skin conditions from psoriasis to eczema, burns to necrotising fascitis and to witness all of them gang up in this tragic emo tale made me bless my Peter Pan perfect, lily white complexion.Jason Cogginshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09509338964933754054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-91157652893492301182011-09-30T22:35:34.278+01:002011-09-30T22:35:34.278+01:00Welcome back! You couldn't stay away could you...Welcome back! You couldn't stay away could you?!<br /><br />Very clever as always, and very interesting way to tell her story. Such a sad (but inevitable)ending.Virginia Moffatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12071059148315715405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-24581145410682268062011-09-30T21:01:39.038+01:002011-09-30T21:01:39.038+01:00In particular loved the way that you matched the p...In particular loved the way that you matched the particular condition with the emotion or stage of life. The third last paragraph, the folding in of her own skin was my favourite description.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-80954620284548821072011-09-30T21:01:33.202+01:002011-09-30T21:01:33.202+01:00In particular loved the way that you matched the p...In particular loved the way that you matched the particular condition with the emotion or stage of life. The third last paragraph, the folding in of her own skin was my favourite description.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-9606267192938839072011-09-30T19:19:14.382+01:002011-09-30T19:19:14.382+01:00I was wondering how you'd work the conditions ...I was wondering how you'd work the conditions into your piece, and I am agreably pleased. Well, the story is super sad, but well done, your writing shines through:)Anne Michaudhttp://annecmichaud.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-72794190124902250502011-09-30T08:26:01.379+01:002011-09-30T08:26:01.379+01:00Sad, fleshy carnage - yet somehow indestructible. ...Sad, fleshy carnage - yet somehow indestructible. The skin, the body's biggest organ, at its best, can give us goosebumps, how smooth and shiny and pore-less and how lucky are the few who can be airbrushed out of reality (nothing to me, I've got rosacea myself)? <br /><br />O sweet, succulent skin - makes you never want to taste it again.<br /><br />Stunning, Marc.Dijeratichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12986680442575436037noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-35088151184116201472011-09-30T02:40:55.292+01:002011-09-30T02:40:55.292+01:00Whoa! Poor girl. I love the language in this piece...Whoa! Poor girl. I love the language in this piece. The descriptions are wonderful.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com