tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post4913846640950944032..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: Help!Sulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-45386575976756598492011-09-03T13:59:29.540+01:002011-09-03T13:59:29.540+01:00I adore, "The After-Image Man."
After r...I adore, "The After-Image Man."<br /><br />After reading the blurb, I still prefer it.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-67007216955119059652011-09-03T09:31:15.036+01:002011-09-03T09:31:15.036+01:00I like The Third Eye Policeman.
FWIW. ;)
Vix @los...I like The Third Eye Policeman.<br />FWIW. ;)<br /><br />Vix @lostvioletpressVixen Phillipshttp://lostviolet.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-19030606147000361962011-09-03T09:05:50.734+01:002011-09-03T09:05:50.734+01:00Cuban Decay OR An eye for an eye for an eye.
But ...Cuban Decay OR An eye for an eye for an eye.<br /><br />But Cuban Decay most punchy.But Cubist Decay even better! PenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-63438354811673463212011-09-03T00:44:46.070+01:002011-09-03T00:44:46.070+01:00The Third Eye Police man, or Death Of The Procedur...The Third Eye Police man, or Death Of The ProcedureTim Pelannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-78484591490231417192011-09-02T14:00:07.811+01:002011-09-02T14:00:07.811+01:00The Death of Procedure, but I also like Linda'...The Death of Procedure, but I also like Linda's suggestion.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-81615739429914363582011-09-02T13:52:12.147+01:002011-09-02T13:52:12.147+01:00Thanks guys, keep 'em coming.
The Cuban Decay...Thanks guys, keep 'em coming.<br /><br />The Cuban Decay thing probably isn't going to win, but it's a reference to the process of mend & make do of Cuba under the US blockade and applying a similar decay to the dystopia in the book. It's not actually set in Cuba.Sulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-29723073003381903312011-09-02T11:41:37.972+01:002011-09-02T11:41:37.972+01:00Fascinating synopsis. I would read the book. BUT.....Fascinating synopsis. I would read the book. BUT... you will need to tweak toreflect whatever title you choose. <br /><br />Like Cuban Decay but there is nothing in synopsis to tell us this is a Cuban story.<br /><br />If I had to choose -- The Death of Procedure<br /><br />But why not simply - The Third Eye?<br /><br />Very exciting for you - congrats! Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-46061432935401189232011-09-02T10:46:53.709+01:002011-09-02T10:46:53.709+01:00Sounds like a good read. I vote for 'The Death...Sounds like a good read. I vote for 'The Death of Procedure' as it has an echo of the dystopic 'The Death of Grass' (although John Christopher wasn't writing about murdered police informants). Here's one not on your list, 'EyePlod.'AntCityUKnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-90407576113839106462011-09-02T00:11:11.745+01:002011-09-02T00:11:11.745+01:00After Image ManAfter Image ManAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16518183823230864763noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-738086758609463152011-09-01T22:17:35.799+01:002011-09-01T22:17:35.799+01:00After Image Man or Eye for eye, etc.After Image Man or Eye for eye, etc.Lee Ann Harrisonhttp://www.artstoryboarding.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-10962374861704702242011-09-01T22:08:12.292+01:002011-09-01T22:08:12.292+01:00After image man sounds cool and somewhat descripti...After image man sounds cool and somewhat descriptive. Also hints that the criminal mastermind might have same talent.Cat Russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14160039271069426174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-69902793055027709062011-09-01T22:00:52.599+01:002011-09-01T22:00:52.599+01:00hmmm, not in love with any of the titles, would ...hmmm, not in love with any of the titles, would go along with others on third eye policeman, but i thought it would be cooler if you could twist the phrase "third eye blind" into something that fit "third eye vision", "third eye cop", third eyesight", "3 eyed cop," so just rambling, i have fun playing with titles !!! good luck, smart to put out requests for commentsAndy Hhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16353341393079842957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-71182875167193289542011-09-01T21:40:39.278+01:002011-09-01T21:40:39.278+01:00An Eye For An Eye For An Eye :o)An Eye For An Eye For An Eye :o)Lexxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12901376066438109828noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-44885877898576756182011-09-01T18:10:31.934+01:002011-09-01T18:10:31.934+01:00Before I read it I liked The Third eye Policeman &...Before I read it I liked The Third eye Policeman & after it I prefer Third Eye Witness.<br /><br />Hope this helps.<br /><br />TheTwistedOneTheTwistedOnehttp://jamiepenn.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-185952884848046172011-09-01T16:55:25.605+01:002011-09-01T16:55:25.605+01:00Before the blurb I liked The Third Eye Policeman. ...Before the blurb I liked The Third Eye Policeman. After reading the blurb I liked it even more.Chuck Allenhttp://www.chuckallen.usnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-61579927999638115922011-09-01T13:25:56.849+01:002011-09-01T13:25:56.849+01:00Options aplenty. Preferred titles:
The After Image...Options aplenty. Preferred titles:<br />The After Image Man<br />An Eye for an Eye for an Eye<br />The Death of Procedure<br />Adam B @revhappinessAdam Bhttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-88261925458911778462011-09-01T13:24:27.552+01:002011-09-01T13:24:27.552+01:00After Image man
or Third Eye Policeman get my vote...After Image man<br />or Third Eye Policeman get my votes.<br />VivAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-72957088738168406282011-09-01T02:59:05.381+01:002011-09-01T02:59:05.381+01:00Without the blurb I was in doubt between An Eye Fo...Without the blurb I was in doubt between An Eye For An Eye For An Eye and The After Image Man (without the "the"), but after the blurb I agree with Nikki. Besides, the eye option gets literal and symbolic after reading the blurb. I like the dichotomy.Marihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08570428969140414779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-76033202329483903942011-09-01T02:09:26.581+01:002011-09-01T02:09:26.581+01:00I'm with Denise on that one. Death and Procedu...I'm with Denise on that one. Death and Procedure match your blurb.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-22062530214201152011-09-01T00:50:34.731+01:002011-09-01T00:50:34.731+01:00I like The Third Eye Policeman, although the "...I like The Third Eye Policeman, although the "a deadly game" phrase at the end of your little synopsis caught my attention. Maybe because Hunger Games is so wildly popular right now? I don't know, but can't wait to read it, sounds intriguing!<br />-shannonshaonnon espositohttp://soesposito.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-78566341682077132442011-08-31T22:52:50.015+01:002011-08-31T22:52:50.015+01:00I liked "Cuban Decay" the best...althoug...I liked "Cuban Decay" the best...although I wasn't sure what it had to do with the synopsis and assumed that Simon is from Cuba. Or is this set in Cuba? Miami? Perhaps mention where this all takes place.<br /><br />Second place getter: "An Eye For An Eye For An Eye" - a title like that holds great potential for cover art.Martin Turnbullhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17601007841962086724noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-478187851189694532011-08-31T22:39:39.712+01:002011-08-31T22:39:39.712+01:00Mm, tricksy. These titles feel very much more &quo...Mm, tricksy. These titles feel very much more "regular" than the synopsis. The After Image Man is the one that fits best by far. What you need is something that sounds like it could have been a Philip K Dick Title - something with the rhythm of We Can Remember it For You Wholesale. The DEath of Procedure almost works but is too mainstream - The Death of The Procedure is more in keeping?Dan Hollowayhttp://danholloway.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-10876174102341127792011-08-31T21:48:46.770+01:002011-08-31T21:48:46.770+01:00I prefer The Sum of The Parts.
@Mashie1964I prefer The Sum of The Parts.<br /><br />@Mashie1964Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-27050192637716266392011-08-31T20:59:57.765+01:002011-08-31T20:59:57.765+01:00I like either Procedural Death or The Death of Pro...I like either Procedural Death or The Death of Procedure. Can't quite decide which I prefer. I like the sound of the words, and they fit with the the blurb - all the usual procedures are dying away.Denisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07552177172693992369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-1505377479261909302011-08-31T20:55:59.898+01:002011-08-31T20:55:59.898+01:00The Third Eye Policeman does it for me.The Third Eye Policeman does it for me.Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.com