tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post470435154204346139..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: Drying Out (Flash Fiction)Sulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-87943976049612040102009-12-27T21:53:31.462+00:002009-12-27T21:53:31.462+00:00Any body part is fallible and ripe for the poetics...Any body part is fallible and ripe for the poetics of decay and dissolution. Maybe I'm just starting from the top and working my way down?<br /><br />Thanks for the heads up re typo.<br /><br />MSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-57590158732484128632009-12-27T21:29:15.132+00:002009-12-27T21:29:15.132+00:00Hair features prominently in your work as a totem...Hair features prominently in your work as a totem for pain and despair, it seems.<br /><br />Marvelous, and with a more lilting cadence than I've heard from you before, which added greatly to the piece. Embedded itmore deeply in my consciousness.<br /><br />Typo alert - final para first line that/than :)Agnieszkas Shoeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07831763071877082489noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-30837259226762638712009-12-27T16:04:31.432+00:002009-12-27T16:04:31.432+00:00Thank you both very much.
marcThank you both very much. <br /><br />marcSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-12831616470790147622009-12-27T15:10:20.951+00:002009-12-27T15:10:20.951+00:00No moisture anywhere. Even the MC's relationsh...No moisture anywhere. Even the MC's relationship with Coptic lover could not quench thirst...their "love" did not hold the necessary liquid.<br /><br />The person was dessicated but the writing was not. <br /><br />Every word painting a slash of color to the arid portrait. <br /><br />I toast you with a glass of water!Marisa Birnshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17945909737147497606noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-16188448869703574332009-12-27T14:34:18.329+00:002009-12-27T14:34:18.329+00:00Marc,
Oh, I am really thirsty now, my mouth got so...Marc,<br />Oh, I am really thirsty now, my mouth got so dry reading this. Your imagery was so vivid, focused on the state of the body.<br /><br />"My acidity becoming more and more concentrated as I lack for aqueousness. At a hundred percent purity, I will become fully unreactive, that inexorable glacial trajectory of my life. Must be close by now."<br /><br />Wow! That is a "killer" statement. And, so is "I am wanting for the meltwater, but the glacier is impermeable."<br /><br />Very powerful! It may be over for this poor person, but this has given me resolve to get out and exercise, and hydrate!!Anne Tyler Lordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16909141266966569378noreply@blogger.com