tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post4029959371953268738..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: Lunar Tic - FridayFlashSulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger36125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-83657036435308741072010-10-13T16:05:56.405+01:002010-10-13T16:05:56.405+01:00Oh Marc! You've done it again. Concise and bri...Oh Marc! You've done it again. Concise and brilliant. ( But you always do it, so I shan't be surprised!Just pleased.)Lirashttp://juicymetaphor.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-19435032425452133922010-10-13T13:47:04.523+01:002010-10-13T13:47:04.523+01:00I love how you gradually let this thread out, and ...I love how you gradually let this thread out, and the ending is superb.Lauritahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-44889269111261433782010-10-13T06:15:11.183+01:002010-10-13T06:15:11.183+01:00Sorry I'm so late to this but ... man, what ca...Sorry I'm so late to this but ... man, what can else be said? Great reveal, Marc!!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-41876923989277759752010-10-12T12:35:08.659+01:002010-10-12T12:35:08.659+01:00"basic human rite" - indeed!!
I saw it ..."basic human rite" - indeed!!<br /><br />I saw it coming a little before the end, but its beauty was not in a twist - fabulous idea of the werewolf not knowing whether it's night or not, and this interrupting (or not!) his bio rythms...mazzz in leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-19364752501618186322010-10-11T04:01:09.191+01:002010-10-11T04:01:09.191+01:00So I'm sympathetic with the mom.
Actually, w...So I'm sympathetic with the mom. <br /><br />Actually, wait. <br /><br />This one stumped me, I could not figure it out. I thought for sure he was a psychopath. Not what he was. The meat should probably have clued me in. <br /><br />The writing, I loved it, so very much. It was beautiful, and I could have kept reading it for hours, had the story been that long.Crystalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15106973483461489686noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-2657682300471067652010-10-11T02:56:34.074+01:002010-10-11T02:56:34.074+01:00Great story that sucked me right in and I couldn&#...Great story that sucked me right in and I couldn't figure it out until the very last! and then I was like OHHHH!A. S. Boudreauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01158308489406327088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-91106791473922180802010-10-11T00:19:19.493+01:002010-10-11T00:19:19.493+01:00Wow. That was a great read all the way through. Lo...Wow. That was a great read all the way through. Loved the BAM at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-17642544225131585152010-10-10T12:21:49.418+01:002010-10-10T12:21:49.418+01:00No John, wasn't aware of them. Thanks for the ...No John, wasn't aware of them. Thanks for the heads up.<br /><br />Bests<br /><br />MarcSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-46434561679886635652010-10-10T10:33:30.795+01:002010-10-10T10:33:30.795+01:00hey wow!
Great flash - well done :)hey wow!<br />Great flash - well done :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-20837501884070896152010-10-10T05:06:37.014+01:002010-10-10T05:06:37.014+01:00Are you aware of the Czeisler and Weitzman experim...Are you aware of the Czeisler and Weitzman experiments where they deprived patients of time awareness like this to figure out our biological clock? Might be neat to compare the cases, not that they saw anything like your fella.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-50133799700556706162010-10-09T21:57:03.899+01:002010-10-09T21:57:03.899+01:00What a cruel way of controlling his "disease&...What a cruel way of controlling his "disease". Love the descriptions and his longing for hunting, and the story flows very nicely. Excellent one!Marihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303695124956391293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-60113628843802757902010-10-09T17:40:33.107+01:002010-10-09T17:40:33.107+01:00Nice. Perspective done well. Descriptions, spot on...Nice. Perspective done well. Descriptions, spot on. A nice little morsel.David G Shrockhttp://www.dracotorre.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-80540928996848491122010-10-09T03:06:25.946+01:002010-10-09T03:06:25.946+01:00Loved how they mocked him with cooked meat. Great ...Loved how they mocked him with cooked meat. Great build of information until the final reveal. Good story!Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-63880035443062510602010-10-08T23:18:51.426+01:002010-10-08T23:18:51.426+01:00That one was deliberate DJ! They aren't always...That one was deliberate DJ! They aren't always I have to admit. <br /><br />M xSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-12111440239455427932010-10-08T23:02:50.592+01:002010-10-08T23:02:50.592+01:00"My mother had a phobia of snakes. Not the cr..."My mother had a phobia of snakes. Not the creatures themselves, but of how they moved." I just loved this distinction. Like the play in the title and the slow feed of information on the way to revelation was very, very effective.Melissahttp://windspiritgirl.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-67268463665239867212010-10-08T22:54:05.275+01:002010-10-08T22:54:05.275+01:00This was fun - and just in time for Halloween. Yo...This was fun - and just in time for Halloween. You do the whole 'beast in a cage' one better by giving us the beast's point of view and isn't he a wily one? <br /><br />Quick question though, your wordplay is always paramount - did you mean 'rite' as in ritual in the first paragraph or is that a misspelling? I can see how it would work either way.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-37933754830755468742010-10-08T22:42:17.955+01:002010-10-08T22:42:17.955+01:00I guessed where you were going with this before th...I guessed where you were going with this before the last line but that's just because you grabbed me from the word go. Definitely one of your best!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-91501744175584470662010-10-08T19:13:22.495+01:002010-10-08T19:13:22.495+01:00Oh yes. Most awesome story. But frottaged to orgas...Oh yes. Most awesome story. But frottaged to orgasm? You have a very cerebral werewolf on your hands. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-69887468132276212292010-10-08T18:25:48.104+01:002010-10-08T18:25:48.104+01:00Didn't see it coming. Loved the story.Didn't see it coming. Loved the story.CathrynLouishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06380932922178601607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-2210857080934743952010-10-08T14:59:06.163+01:002010-10-08T14:59:06.163+01:00Great story. Kept me guessing until the end.Great story. Kept me guessing until the end.Leehttp://tin-robot.com/houseofbluelights/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-85170792182651257582010-10-08T14:52:33.015+01:002010-10-08T14:52:33.015+01:00I want to echo all the other comments here. The dr...I want to echo all the other comments here. The drip feed of information about the prisoner built to a stunning waterfall of an ending.<br /><br />Unlike some comments made I continued to be sympathetic afterwards - after all a guy's gotta eat.Mandy K Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05107477886064281756noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-30939524827360482592010-10-08T14:49:28.251+01:002010-10-08T14:49:28.251+01:00This one works for me. Great writing - kept me re...This one works for me. Great writing - kept me reading. <br /><br />Jimjim bronyaurhttp://www.jimbronyaur.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-73024575954987007142010-10-08T14:37:08.776+01:002010-10-08T14:37:08.776+01:00Wow, this was so good, I'm smiling! So, what ...Wow, this was so good, I'm smiling! So, what happens now that he's been flushing his medication?shannonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17063218369150683990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-49905581472038712832010-10-08T12:19:34.625+01:002010-10-08T12:19:34.625+01:00The reveal surprised me, but I haven't had my ...The reveal surprised me, but I haven't had my tea yet.<br /><br />I learned once that when we don't have the cues, our bodies react more along the lines of a thirty-ish hour day and we sleep less than six. Course, for your character, it wasn't the sleep.<br /><br />I enjoyed this.pegjethttp://pegjet.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-63691073264448152202010-10-08T10:23:51.287+01:002010-10-08T10:23:51.287+01:00I loved this subtle reveal. So perfect and exquisi...I loved this subtle reveal. So perfect and exquisite. I am left stunned and satisfied.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.com