tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post319649140426245008..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: One-Eyed Queen - Friday FlashSulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-66070733717026367592013-02-06T23:23:44.040+00:002013-02-06T23:23:44.040+00:00I'm glad you drew inspiration from this song b...I'm glad you drew inspiration from this song because it's bloody brilliant Marc. <br /><br />What he envisions in the glass eye, I do as well. Cindy Vaskovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747628778627025130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-46303696814700427502013-02-03T20:35:36.748+00:002013-02-03T20:35:36.748+00:00What an awesome story, Marc. It's crazy how so...What an awesome story, Marc. It's crazy how something we've seen or heard 100 times can suddenly inspire. I loved this line: "Her stance was infinitely more insolent than mine and I was smitten."<br /><br />But the story also frightened me a bit because my aunt has a glass eye--the real one she lost to a lover's anger as well. Danielle La Pagliahttp://www.daniellelapaglia.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-50244647671040979122013-02-02T19:41:42.567+00:002013-02-02T19:41:42.567+00:00Whoa. That is some glass eye. Very pretty writing....Whoa. That is some glass eye. Very pretty writing. sonia lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-7553961015806002652013-02-02T18:09:51.739+00:002013-02-02T18:09:51.739+00:00Hmm...wonder if they can keep it together now he&#...Hmm...wonder if they can keep it together now he's seen that in her eyes. Fascinating idea and powerfully told.Virginia Moffatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12071059148315715405noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-78992174628424219012013-02-02T16:58:19.488+00:002013-02-02T16:58:19.488+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.Denisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07552177172693992369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-62713365604519924012013-02-02T16:57:29.097+00:002013-02-02T16:57:29.097+00:00Beautiful, emotional and passionate. Surprising.
...Beautiful, emotional and passionate. Surprising. <br />Denisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07552177172693992369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-26669933190741351792013-02-02T12:36:26.217+00:002013-02-02T12:36:26.217+00:00Very colourful imagery in this Marc.
I really lik...Very colourful imagery in this Marc.<br /><br />I really liked the interaction at the party, although he tried to gain the initiative, I think it was hers all along.<br /><br />A wonderfully descriptive journey through the transformations inside her false eye during the love-making.<br /><br />Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-27907135899160494792013-02-02T05:33:19.399+00:002013-02-02T05:33:19.399+00:00I liked how the glass eye reacted after all. And d...I liked how the glass eye reacted after all. And definitely all the posing at the beginning.<br /><br />Your postscript was interesting, 'cos I got my story this week partly from "Down in the Park" by Gary Numan. I think it's like chemistry -- the known prompt is inert until it reacts with other factors known and unknown.Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-29557252534713109032013-02-01T20:02:33.252+00:002013-02-01T20:02:33.252+00:00I always find it fascinating to see where songs co...I always find it fascinating to see where songs come from, and this story seemed to 'illustrate' that song perfectly.Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-78353568159460852642013-02-01T13:34:47.270+00:002013-02-01T13:34:47.270+00:00Especially loved the making love scenes. Very intr...Especially loved the making love scenes. Very intriguing.Mary Papashttp://www.writersownwords.com/marypapas/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-41870950673383591792013-02-01T13:29:18.592+00:002013-02-01T13:29:18.592+00:00I particularly enjoyed the early part of the court...I particularly enjoyed the early part of the courtship. Delicious line: "Her stance was infinitely more insolent than mine and I was smitten."<br /><br />That last paragraph... well, let's just say it took me a whole month before I could face putting my contact lenses in when I first started wearing them - squeams ahoy!mazzz_in_Leedshttp://mazzz-in-leeds.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-21816891055584019722013-02-01T05:31:27.786+00:002013-02-01T05:31:27.786+00:00Sensual and visual writing, Marc. There was a rea... Sensual and visual writing, Marc. There was a real 'focus' to this piece. ^_^ Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.com