tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post1989814408488499308..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: Dirty Money - Friday FlashSulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-45903296253227122712012-05-31T22:06:14.609+01:002012-05-31T22:06:14.609+01:00This was an interesting story to read. I had no i...This was an interesting story to read. I had no idea where it was going to go and was pleasantly surprised at the end. Good twist there and some irony too. Enjoye dit!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-68285614667860318962012-05-31T15:33:16.076+01:002012-05-31T15:33:16.076+01:00Superb voice in this Marc! And I love the irony of...Superb voice in this Marc! And I love the irony of his situation - wanting so badly to rebel but ending up just like his father, (or at least that's how I read it). In any case, I enjoyed this very much!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-4875524516766052942012-05-29T23:27:01.866+01:002012-05-29T23:27:01.866+01:00What an eerie boy of thirteen. Very striking voice...What an eerie boy of thirteen. Very striking voice throughout this piece.<br />Loved the 'chapped lip service to the religion'.Brinda Banerjeehttp://modscheherzade.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-43437824149573251772012-05-28T00:05:22.786+01:002012-05-28T00:05:22.786+01:00Always a clever twist on the everyday. Fantastic.
...Always a clever twist on the everyday. Fantastic.<br />Adam B @revhappinessAdam Bhttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-11089989086142111742012-05-26T09:44:37.886+01:002012-05-26T09:44:37.886+01:00"Job done." A good way of putting it, a ..."Job done." A good way of putting it, a bit like an exorcism really.<br /><br />Hopefully he can get on with what matters to him personally now.Steve Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18414279461366098783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-87363682476473637052012-05-26T01:15:34.864+01:002012-05-26T01:15:34.864+01:00I also really like the line, "In this religio...I also really like the line, "In this religion our family paid chapped lip service to"Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-48356121859841838382012-05-26T00:00:14.667+01:002012-05-26T00:00:14.667+01:00Lovely ending. Fits. Not sure what I was expecting...Lovely ending. Fits. Not sure what I was expecting, but not that.Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-15706807819170750032012-05-25T22:11:22.149+01:002012-05-25T22:11:22.149+01:00I really didn't see the ending, cleverI really didn't see the ending, cleverAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00398872718646932305noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-78967839219488609752012-05-25T20:47:50.199+01:002012-05-25T20:47:50.199+01:00So much family dynamic going on here. This is my f...So much family dynamic going on here. This is my favorite line: "In this religion our family paid chapped lip service to" Excellent job.Danielle La Pagliahttp://www.daniellelapaglia.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-36959579262399574822012-05-25T14:06:37.175+01:002012-05-25T14:06:37.175+01:00Clever twist on the phrase "cleaning up"...Clever twist on the phrase "cleaning up". My parents, being eminently practical, confiscated all gift money and put it in the bank.Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-70642370463074581012012-05-25T13:22:07.286+01:002012-05-25T13:22:07.286+01:00It'll certainly be interesting to see where he...It'll certainly be interesting to see where he goes from here!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-7519247233564207462012-05-25T09:43:03.648+01:002012-05-25T09:43:03.648+01:00This is superb. The pacing is fantastic and it had...This is superb. The pacing is fantastic and it had me on the edge of my seat - I didn't realise until the end but I was really tensing up as I read it. I bet this character has an interesting life ahead of him.Rebecca Eminhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01931904595437049369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-60435417799865103662012-05-25T09:18:30.496+01:002012-05-25T09:18:30.496+01:00He surprised me. I thought he was over his head in...He surprised me. I thought he was over his head in the family but it looks like he fit right in. Nice.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-71746326808452712402012-05-24T23:24:17.383+01:002012-05-24T23:24:17.383+01:00This was pretty awesome. The voice seemed to almos...This was pretty awesome. The voice seemed to almost change and grow up with the MC, going from a 19th century feel to a more modern 21st century feel. Not sure if you were going for that, but it mirrored nicely!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16518183823230864763noreply@blogger.com