tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post1260530298608831947..comments2024-01-27T20:23:45.771+00:00Comments on Sulci Collective: Memory (Non-Linear Flash Fiction)Sulci Collectivehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-34047008692293829232011-02-19T11:35:59.719+00:002011-02-19T11:35:59.719+00:00As always I'm left stumbling over my crude voc...As always I'm left stumbling over my crude vocabulary in order to summarize how I feel after reading your masterful works. Well done sir.Carrie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-54363367964547411692011-02-18T20:14:51.910+00:002011-02-18T20:14:51.910+00:00Word and idea emersion...this was quite a trip...i...Word and idea emersion...this was quite a trip...it's beautiful...and I loved the picture that you included with it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-64379372657729980332011-02-18T19:44:01.795+00:002011-02-18T19:44:01.795+00:00Wow. It's like an explosion of word and though...Wow. It's like an explosion of word and thought that makes me want to start grabbing all the bits and putting them back together just so I can make explode again.Lou Freshwaterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08849342766852653969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-23637929604684687492011-02-18T17:22:45.980+00:002011-02-18T17:22:45.980+00:00Very cool story, and quite a unique way of present...Very cool story, and quite a unique way of presenting it.Eric J. Krausehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-83925566643140297412011-02-18T14:45:17.763+00:002011-02-18T14:45:17.763+00:00Bombinate - LOVE that word! And how effectively yo...Bombinate - LOVE that word! And how effectively you used it, and all the rest, to show how precious memories are. One of my favorites Marc.Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-78470527494094910722011-02-18T14:04:24.127+00:002011-02-18T14:04:24.127+00:00I'm not sure why but this sentence just encaps...I'm not sure why but this sentence just encapsulated it all for me; "Recurring memory of occurrings not ready for recollection at collection point 'C'." Perhaps it's a latent phobia of Argos, but it just truly summed up how the brain processes memory (that's even before the memory is ready for collection, only to find it's the wrong one)Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-82468252511579515032011-02-18T09:32:56.496+00:002011-02-18T09:32:56.496+00:00Thanks DJ, I think that last sentence in the comme...Thanks DJ, I think that last sentence in the comment was possibly the nicest thing anyone could say about my work. :)<br /><br />M xSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-81590029604267068942011-02-18T09:23:42.487+00:002011-02-18T09:23:42.487+00:00My first thought was 'wordgasm!' But I ha...My first thought was 'wordgasm!' But I have to go a little further than that.<br /><br />There's an anxiety playing out here - an anxiety of language (and memory), that is a breakdown in reverse. A bit like watching someone grasp for the 'right thing to say' as the words circle around him. There's panic in it. <br /><br />In every construct there is the formula for its deconstruction - something I always appreciate about your pieces.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-24832519683815768892011-02-18T09:12:36.279+00:002011-02-18T09:12:36.279+00:00I love this. Brilliant!
PenI love this. Brilliant!<br />PenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-85413491748841736432011-02-18T00:33:06.401+00:002011-02-18T00:33:06.401+00:00Very cool. Love the word cloud and the deutsch tra...Very cool. Love the word cloud and the deutsch translation. It's kind of performance art, but with words. And bombinate! Yes! Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-44895444303826474342011-02-17T23:57:07.709+00:002011-02-17T23:57:07.709+00:00Stunningly effective. I love this!Stunningly effective. I love this!$andra Murphyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05241277932468654747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-87504274198480325512011-02-17T23:14:33.299+00:002011-02-17T23:14:33.299+00:00Abstract expressionist I'd hope rather than ou...Abstract expressionist I'd hope rather than our Dandy...<br /><br />Thanks for readingSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5179795275664264195.post-71687501782577978512011-02-17T23:13:35.063+00:002011-02-17T23:13:35.063+00:00Very interesting piece. It reminded me of our conv...Very interesting piece. It reminded me of our conversation about quanta and the wave/matter dichotomy. It also felt like an abstract painting, or an Andy Warhol. Can't decide which.Marihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07303695124956391293noreply@blogger.com