Thursday, 19 February 2015

Breaking Up - Friday Flash

“… connection… Frustrating…” 

“What?… hear me… …out?”

“Difficult… trying… very…”

“… not enough… and… bars”

“… signal… You… … lousy…”

“Can’t fight… You… there?”

“… forget… us… bother…”

“… give… chance… might”

“…my… back… Unforgivable”

“Time…”

“… later…”

“Actually… meaning…”

“… much too…”

“Static… both… …”

“Oath?”

“… said ‘growth’…”

“Let’s… clear…”

“This…”

“Pointless… … ring… back”

“… waste… …precious…”

“… breaking up…”

“Sorry…?”


“Dumped”

10 comments:

Helen A. Howell said...

Don't you just hate it when your phone line plays up!

ganymeder said...

Aaaaaand... I think they got the message! :)

Hawksword said...

This made me laugh - my keypad is playing up atm so even my txt messages come out like a bad Norman Collier set...

Tim VanSant Writes said...

This... ...brilliant...

Chuck Allen said...

At least the breakup wasn't via text message. :)

Steve Green said...

"Dumped" Heheh!

I bet that message came across clear enough. :-)

Sonia Lal said...

the break up message was clear, despite how it broke up.

Jon Jefferson said...

This reminds me of why I don't spend much time at all on phones. Too many problems happen when you use em.

Icy Sedgwick said...

At least they finally got to the point...

The Short Story and Flash Fiction Society said...

Wonderful how you captured those inner voices. Things that sometimes are not said out loud during a break up but so many people think of.
And things that are sometimes said out loud, without people realizing how they come across while saying them.